I dont know what to write at that time.Maybe the citaro bus will
feature electronic eds on my version.I dont know?
In your version? Did you asked Joey for permission to edit? If
you haven't done so, please go and ask him for Permission.
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EDIT: Did you even passed grammar? :P Cos' from your
sentence:
"I dont know what to write at that time.Maybe the citaro bus will feature
electronic eds ON my version.I dont
know?"
Underlined = Error(s). Which I've corrected for you in the
sentence below
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Error
"log":
1) The ON should be IN
2) Punctuation also. You made mistakes on some of the
punctuation.
3) You used the wrong form. :P EG "Electronic EDS" you can just
simply write "Working EDS" isn't it the same?
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Correct sentence should be:
"I don't know what to write at that time. Maybe the Citaro will
feature working EDS in my version? I dont know."
